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使句子多樣化的雅思寫作技巧

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一篇好文章的條件很多。除了內容豐富和組織緊密之外,詞彙的運用和句子的處理,也起着決定性作用。

使句子多樣化的雅思寫作技巧

句子可長可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表達。如果句子清一色是簡單句,文章必定很單調乏味。如果全篇充滿了冗長的複雜句,讀起來也很費力。最好的方法是以簡單句爲基礎,配合適當的並列句和複雜句。簡單句可長可短,通常要加些附屬成分,如分詞短語、介詞短語、副詞短語、不定式動詞短語,以及節縮成分。

總之,作者可根據情況,使句子多樣化,使文章靈活多姿。例如下列五個句子的基本概念一樣,但是句式不同,內容重點也有些差別:

(1)Thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarmandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(並列分句(1)+2)

(2)Grazingpeacefully,thegoatsinthefarmwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(現在分語短語+簡單句)

(3)Inthefarm,thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(副詞短語+並列分句(1)-(2))

(4)Thereweregoatsgrazingpeacefullyinthefarm,unawareoftheapproachinghunter.(簡單句+形容語短語)

(5)Asthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarm,theywereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(原因副詞從句+主句)

(1)和(5)的`句式最常見;如果加上其他三種互相交替,句子不是更多樣化嗎?

最後,看看這兩個句子要如何多樣化呢?

(6)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining.

(7)Hefeltveryuneasy.

(a)Theyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastrainingfeltveryuneasy.

(b)Theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasyduringhisfirstoverseastraining.

(c)Theyoungpilot’’’’’’’’sfirstoverseastrainingmadehimfeelveryuneasy.

(d)Extremeuneasinessseizedtheyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastraining.

(e)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feelingveryuneasy.

(f)Itbeinghisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.

(g)Beingonhisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.

(h)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastrainingandfeltveryuneasy.

(i)Theyoungpilot,whowasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feltveryuneasy.

(j)Whentheyoungpilotwasonhis/firstoverseastrainging,hefeltveryuneasy.

(k)Astheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,hefeltveryuneasy.

(l)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,sothathefeltveryuneasy.

在上述12個句子中,(a)-(g)是簡單句;(h)是並列句;(i)-(l)是複雜句。簡單句除(b)和(g)之外,其他五樣,用的人並不多。人們最喜歡採用複雜句,尤其是(j)和(k)這兩款;接着便是並列句(h)。如果大多數人的句子只限於(b),(g),(h),(j)和(k)這五種,而其他的則棄如敝屣,不是很可惜嗎?